dont like it

Hello, my name is Michael. I am listening to your song as I am typing. Nice bluesy, lounge, bayou sounding tunes. I think the vocals could be turned up. They are pretty low. The Guitar is a little rough sounding as well. It was alright, but to be honest the part where you snap out, and sound like you have turrets kind of killed the whole mood of the song. Overall it was not bad, I wish I could have heard more vocals. Thanks for sharing. Mike

interesting the use of acustic guitar; the recording is a demo, you have to improve it;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; you are in a demo step; original the rapping with guitars but probably this isn't the best way; good luck

I believe this track is doing the artist more harm than good. The guitars are fighting (and losing) the battle to stay in time. The mix is just sad. When the music is this bad, who cares what the artist is saying? Maybe the song is a good one, but the execution is such that you wouldn't get many people interested in listening to the end. Take it down, redo it and repost it when it is mixed properly

I like the acousic guitar in this song; but it is a bit unusual for a rap song, however it seems to work in an odd kind of way...hurrah for you for trying something different.

The swearing wears you out man and could use some help with the instruments it speeds up and slows down to a point it's noticeable and would be well served to have a click track used in the studio.Guitar is weak and should have been turned down in the mix.Good luck.

I like the beat but not into the swearing, not my style

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Sorry guys ..I just couldn't get into the music ..it was a little flat and it was dragging , no excitement in it that made me want to hear more ...the song has possibilities so use your creative flow a pep it up

Reminds me of 'Loser' period Beck. Arrangement is pretty loose and needs tightening up a bit - shorter verses maybe. Lots of potential, though.

You had a good grove going until you got sloppy and hung your morals out to dry. You have talent, try writing something that does not require vulgarity and you might have a much larger listening market...just one thought

this cool could start the day off listen to this song it's always good that the flow of your voice blend with the instrumental and your doing that just project your voice a bit more and you'll be unstoppable

I thought it was a great song. The vocals need to be turned up and tuned up a bit, but it is an overall great song!

Not bad just turn your voice up.

music good

I like the style. It reminds me of G-Love.. who I love. The Vocals need to be way up in the mix. I record all my stuff myself... I usually do seperate tracks for different style vocals. One track for the rap, another for the melody. It would help a ton. The lead guitar sound is great. Really swampy sounding. i loved it. Good luck with everything. Honey Highway Hollywood California

Excellent musicianship, you can tell you are very dedicated to your craft. Keep up the great work

u are a good instrumentalist,good work

The rhythm of the beginning is good, it's a good style of music and guitar. It sound well done.