Great use of instruments for they are going to work like a western film with the cowboys riding and this is one of the bar scenes girls catch guy eye before all f the drama action begins nice man

This song needs drums or some kind of percussion to keep it together. It gets really off beat at a lot of parts. There is no structure to the song.. but I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not. I can hear some talent here on the guitar but you have to stay on beat. It sounds like there is too much going on. Having 2 guitars soloing at the same time rarely works. Keep playing.

you got a real cool vibe and sound your music not to much going on with the track makes it easy to enjoy makes you want to sit back smoke a blunt and groove to the vibe of the music keep up the hard/good work and i'll see you at the top... FOLLOW me on INSTAGRAM & TWITTER and like me on FACEBOOK http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005 http://instagram.com/pinhead_gotti https://twitter.com/pinhead_gotti OR on vine/iampinhead_gotti

This is tuff because I am not sure what your aim was here. It sounds like an open jam session. If that is what you were seeking you got it. There is no hook I can determine as the "SONG." There are some expression I have heard in abstract Jazz that abandon the hook, so there is an audience for that kind of expression. Again I don't know if that's what you were seeking. I think the absence of a rhythmic drive is courageous but it needs to at least have a melodic drive to hold the listener, of course that's my personal opinion. What you have may be what you wanted. If that is the case good job.

Hey Guys, Lots to work on here but you have some players with good guitar skills. Some notes, get some percussion happening to hold it all together. Timing is terrible with missed beats all along the way. Guitars have to stay in scale, too many notes out of scale and "off". Take it back to the basement and get better before bringing it out into the daylight. Good luck.

Interesting start I must say! 00 to 00:31. Suggest that your rhythm section kicking after your intro at 0:33. Your rhythm kicks in from 0:33 to 00:39 goes on to 00:49 then sort of catastrophe's with a missed beat, at 01:21, then gets back into song at 1:36 goes on 01:51. Nice rhythm at 2:21 to 02:19.. continues okay.. Suggest diner, night club, live band show. Not radio! Not yet! Get the missed beat fixed. 03:30 is nice to 04: is good! Has potential. Needs work! Better where there is a live atmosphere and people than radio shows :) Make it less murky!

Nice Intro. It has alot of guitar play, I never heard that done before, It's different. Overall it's a ok song. Good Job, and Much Success to you. Note: Lets connect on social network. Facebook;https://www.facebook.com/luckee.luchiano?ref=tn_tnmn#!/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter;@760_Luch

besides that i can hear some decent playing going on here...however, i have to say that there is no real timing at all...atmosphere is one thing, but it flows against itself in several sections...the soloing isn't always right as far as note selection, but i applaud your efforts...as a producer, i would take this track and any others back to the drawing board and bring the overall levels down at least 4 notches

timing is waaaaay off! this is a low level scratch pad production and should not be presented to the public if you are 10 year olds i apologize

Your just not there. The music sounds like a sloppy mess of choppy ideas. Your instinct is off, and you need a click track.

Nice music.