Thomas' music is interesting. However, it fails to grab the audience...it deserves better. Thomas deserves better. May I suggest a lift and a Chorus? With the lift the music should signal a change, this keeps the audience interested, perhaps motivated. Then following this different passage, the lift, the Chorus, which in a song is the pay-off, which should give the audience, the answers, or point of your song. Keep writing Thomas, also you have a nice voice and a nice clear style.

It's nice to hear a raw recording of a song with just the writer, their voice and their instrument. The melody is nice throughout the song and it has an easy listening vibe to it. i would love to hear the song with a little more production, for example, I can almost already hear backing vocals (female) in the chorus and parts of the verse. I would also like to hear the ending more refined. They lyrics are very good throughout and the song is meaningful and heartfelt.

I got to say that you did a very good job you got your own style and I'm with that no lie keep doing what you are doing in life everything we do does pay off at last it's not easy making music I'm with you brother

Hi Thomas, "I Don't Know Why"... I enjoyed listening to your song. You have a very simple demo of your song, but on one listen, this is a song that if you cut a master recording it would hold it's own with the alternative giants out there. I didn't catch all the lyrics.. it would be good to add the lyrics with the song. I listen to lyrics last, I prefer to have the sound catch my attention , then I'll listen to the story. It's a good title, and would like to hear the words more... All the best, Digee

Thomas Kaxe,nous offre ici une jolie chanson folk simple. On a certes l'impression d'avoir déjà entendu ça. Une suite d'accords souvent employée, mais ça le fait quand même quand on aime le genre. Pourquoi? peut être de la voix, à a fois douce et juste. Pour rien de neuf sous le soleil, mais un moment sincère et agréable

Me gusta mucho la voz y las melodías de este chico. Como en otras canciones que he escuchado, le hace falta una banda ya para sacar todo el potencial que tienen sus canciones y también perder la timidez que parece tener al cantar, se tiene que lanzar, dar más fuerza a su música para que brille más. I really like the voice and the melodies of this guy. Like other songs I've heard, it takes a band already to get the full potential of their songs and also lose the shyness that seems to have when singing, you have to throw, give more force to your music to make it shine more.

I really like the song and I really like your style it is very unique and creative and I like your writing as well as the great sounds of the guitar well composed and well put together I can feel any hear the passion in your voice and at anytime I would love to hear more of your creative music and never stop creating thanks for sharing your gift with me and the world you have a unique gift have a great day and may God continue to bless you in all your endeavors.

i heard the ukulele, and the solo vocal, but thats about it. it wasn't bad, but nothing stuck out to me. i couldn't really tell where the verses started and where the chorus came back in. at least i thought the chorus repeated but i could honestly be saying that because the whole melody sounded very similar. i didn't really hear any vocal hook, either with melody or lyrics, and i definitely didn't hear an instrumental hook. not saying its a bad song but, i don't have the urge to listen to it again, and thats what makes a song good. if someone wants to keep hearing it over and over again

Hi Thomas, Your melody has nice shape and is pleasant to listen to. Nice Job! If it were me.... one thing I might look at would be the sameness of your sections (verse / chorus)... same rhythm... and almost the same chord changes.. When one does that.... it creates an ambience that continues to pull the listener away from your ideas that you're expressing lyrically due to the repetition of the music... In today's age of instant gratification you may be asking a lot of the listener to take the journey of this song with you. I'm not suggesting that this concept can not be used effectively..Joe Cocker's version of "Feeling All Right" is a great example of this idea working. But if one listens to that version... notice how the rhythm varies in order to create interest. Songwriting is a combination of Rhythm / Harmony / Melody and lyrics. All of these elements should be considered when crafting a song. You have a nice start to a song and as you more than likely know.... the hard part awaits you... re-writing... Remember to listen to some of your favorite artists and see what devices they use to "hone" their ideas... Good Luck and Keep Writing! RW

I'll tell you this, I like the tune. Listening, I felt you just wrote this song and wanted a quick demo to remember or get feedback. That's cool, nothing wrong with that at all. To record it, I would track your vocals separate from your guitar, way easier to get a better quality. Also there were some minor chord change mistakes that happened, that would solve your problem with the recorded song. The song itself is really good, I would work a little more on the feel of the tune. You seemed like you were bored or trying to remember it when recording. Honestly, If you mess up record it again, just get your emotions out. You were singing I don't know why, but neither do I till I hear it. Overall, good tune, It's a little long at the end. I think you repeated 3 times with the chorus, could be mistaken. I'd do twice at the most but that's just me. Again, great tune, hope to hear a full band version someday. Oh and lyrics are great as well.

Hi Thomas You have nice vocals and perhaps if your song was more produced it could move a bit more. You could put it on College radio. It has a good coffee house feel to it! I wish you all the best with it! And thank you for sharing it with me! Rachel ????????