Very catchy. Enjoyable for myself and also sounds marketable to a wide variety of listeners. Vocalist is in point with melodies. Music theory is complimentee with a song structure compiled in a common hit format. Positive message in the lyrical content. Excellent work. Leaves me wanting to hear more and again. Thank you. ~ Ru$t

Hey. I just dropped a slapper on my page for N1M. I call it EXOTIC TEMPTING. It's an instrumental that is only 1min and 30 second heat. I will extend the track in the near future, just trying to strike a buzz first. My name is Splitendz The PROFIT here in Los Angeles Ca and I'm apart of BugleBlack Music Group. We are not a joke. All Organic JazzHop from inside out. I just dropped 2 music videos that's on N1M. Filmed Directed and edited by me. We are currently working on this E40 tour. If interested on being apart of headline opening it's just 250 1 song room and board arrangements included.

Try to make your verses shorter see you can hear the chorus and your bridge more. Keep them coming whatever you do don’t stop. Production is good just try to keep the length a little shorter and keep making the chorus catchy.

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Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting. Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting. Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting

I'm feelin it! I thought that there was too much reverb on your vocals, and your hook and verse sounded too much alike.. I think if you make the hook more full with anotha take or two, or even just throw some chorus effects to widen it and leave the reverb the way it is and make the verse a little more dry by turning the reverb effect down to differentiate between the hook and verse. I think that will make both stand out and liven it up alot

03/13/18 08:35:57 AM Should I push this song. Let me know how you feel about this single. Oh No (Unleashed) Review & Earn 03/13/18 08:35:57 AM Should I push this song. Let me know how you feel about this single. Oh No (Unleashed) Review & Earn

I like the song.One thing i can say is always be confident in your music and sometimes you might think pushing a song is good but look at your likes and push the songs people like the most even if your wondering why they like this song instead of that 1....you are your biggest critic

Mixing sounds good, too much cussing nothing against cussing I do so in my music to but when have to do a radio edited version the words will be completely out or you will have to change it up. Hook is missing something like extra background, I would probably put a melody under it with auto tune or a singer as a single I would advise not to but would be a great album song just my opinion but there’s 7billion people in the world so just my opinion doesn’t mean much b

This is pure fire man!! The message is true and real!! The flows is tight and the production is banging!!! I say push this song thousands of people gone fill this! Keep up the good work see you at the top!!!

This song was dope man enjoyed everything about it including lyrics, flow, and beat. The message behind the song was dope too really enjoyed the idea of go for your dreams and do whatever you can to make money because without it you fail in life, simple as that, and the flow and lyrics demonstrate that idea clearly, which is dope. Also Viewboi Shine's ability to flow and harmonize his lyrics sounds clean and enjoyable to listen too. Overall this song "Oh No," done by Viewboi Shine sounds clean, well produced, and as said before the mixture of flow and harmonized lyrics sounds dope! Overall I really enjoyed this track and song and look forward to hearing more of Viewboi Shines tracks. 9.2/10 Keep doing ya thing homie and forget all them haters keep getting that paper to support you and your family I can dig it! It's the world we live in so you have to do what you have to do!

first off the production / beat is hard af. i feel you one hundred percent on the concept /gist of the song , im rocking with them bars too g , that second verse hard , what i dont like is the mix , i hope this isnt the final master , needs a better mix imo, a good mix would of pushed this to 4 -4.5 stars easy

Your music is slapping good work ethic and keep driving to be on top.. You got the tools your own sound let's get this..... Check my music out BTW let me know what tour think Coldflo look up om YouTube as well

Nice track the uptempo pace gave it the trap music feel. Considering all things equal the lyrics were ok the chorus seemed to carry the 1st and second verse. However I would give the project 3 out of 5 the mix down was a factor in the whole sound of the track. Nice effort on your part bro.

Just telling it like it is.. Not my bag of music, but hey, You Got this !!!! Honest lyrics that has to be heard...Hip groove and could easily hang with the best of them. No Hate here my brother, SAY it, tell it all !!!

This track is nice. I has a nice trap beat. Nice vocals, lyrics and hook as well. The vocals and beat tempo remained in sync throughout the majority of the track nothing negative to add except it was little out of sync near the end around where you started rapping about people in your space other than that great work!. This track has potentials for moving up the chart.

Yea, what up Homie. First and most importantly i wanna say that this is only an observation, and at the end of the day ya growth is going to depend on yur ability to view yur own without bias. As Far as pushing this Cut as a Single? I Say dont do it. I listened to yur Verses bar for Bar and overall i have to say there are too many elements in the Make up of a single the do not Mirror yur Verses. The Production is most important and it aint on that Level. And the Hook Aint strong as it could be fro. Listening to yur Verses. Peace HoMie

the intro was interesting it kept me listening more into the song and then he starts off the song with a melody hook which was catchy and then he goes into his verse which he demonstrates a great flow using real life stories and references.

I like it man good job! I'm a solid old school rap lover yet the way you mixed old school rap with trap is nice! Well done! Make some more please! I'll add you to my favorites in anticipation for the next track!

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