Good job sounds really good keep up the great work I admire the music you make something new and sound is quite interesting so like I said before good job and keep up the great job. You can make it far.

good bro sounds good don´t put too much reverb into your voice just tried to work more on that but the rest of all is cool the song you got a great song expand it in whole world tunecore do it

Very nice job, the music is a perfect beat choice with it's combination with lyricism and the flow is on point. i really enjoyed the composition. The writing is deep and poignant. Very much a song that is relative to today's struggles. Much success to you, Nice vocals too

You have mad skills if you created the instrumental! Uhm feeling the vocals as well as the style.. You're really talented this spring I may be looking towards nationwide collaborators it's no pay involved right now yet I'd be traveling to your area and I ?ive in TN.. You have a dark side which isn't being shown its like you're letting your good uncover the bad and it's pretty ass kicking if you ask me.. Could you imagine Mariah Carey Jay-Z n Lenny Kravitz doing an album together?! That's what uhm working on you will also ghett your own version of the song.. text me if you're interested in Linkin up! 8645132175 Michael also how long ago did you write this??

Ima need you to pursue music like you have no other option. That means you need to inv st your money and time into finding a professional local or nationally known studio, so they can give you some mainstream quality when it comes to your voice/sound. Also you need to take your time, because 90% of the song didn't rhyme at all. I know everyone wants to be a rapper/singer/whatever it is they like to do...

very , very heavy message ....I can appreciate what you are saying to the listener . This track makes you take a look at yourself and those who are in your circle . Tell the truth and the truth shall set you free . Great track Young Kermit . looking forward to more

I have been linked to the professional music industry for years and have had the opportunity to work with some of the greats either directly or indirectly and have always been a good listener. Your song loses me because of (1) it takes too long to develop at the beginning and (2) the sound quality is not good a all. I'm not sure if this is a rough version but either way by sharing it to the public you expose yourself to everything. The effect on the vocals also takes away from the clarity of the lyrics and makes it hard to even rock with the lyricist. If you are serious about your music I would suggest to either work with someone who knows how to produce, record and mix or take some classes (You can learn virtually anything these days on youtube. This is all constructive criticism so please don't take this personally. If you want to get better you will eat this up like food and get stronger. Good luck with your future endeavors.

Hello, just wanted to say keep up the hard work I most definitely recommend your song also you can check us out for hardcore rap, R&B & instrumentals. More to come in the future from Block Lo, REBELEARZ & 8TM ENT.

Not big on hip-hop but here goes. It was very difficult to understand the lyrical content as it came across as muffled as the quality of the recording needs much improvement. There is a distinct HISS throughout. The music is laid nicely but in order to make things come together the other content must shine as well. It would aid your artistic intent if the vocals were as well presented as the rest of the material. This piece came come to light with more work as it has some potential. Don't give up!

T production is nice, arrangement is good, the message is cool, the vocals need some improvement. Overall the song lacks appeal for the style and genre the artists is aiming, not sure if it's hip hop or Christian rap.

This sounds really interesting. I like the voice of the singer in the beginning but the rapper I wasn't feeling at all. What would've probably worked better for him if he actually rapped and not sang because the auto tune on his voice didn't sound right. It sounded like he started to actually flow (which needs more improvement) then he started going a bit too fast which ended up making him go out of sync with the rest of the beat.

BEAUTIFUL SONG AND GOOD BEATZ WITH THE CRYING WHICH IS ALSO GOOD.YOU HARD YOU GET THE REWARD AND THIS IS PROVING IT. BEAUTIFUL SONG AND GOOD BEATZ WITH THE CRYING WHICH IS ALSO GOOD.YOU HARD YOU GET THE REWARD AND THIS IS PROVING IT. BEAUTIFUL SONG AND GOOD BEATZ WITH THE CRYING WHICH IS ALSO GOOD.YOU HARD YOU GET THE REWARD AND THIS IS PROVING IT. BEAUTIFUL SONG AND GOOD BEATZ WITH THE CRYING WHICH IS ALSO GOOD.YOU HARD YOU GET THE REWARD AND THIS IS PROVING IT.

What's good Young Kermit. Since you specifically requested me to review I'm going to be real with you as I am with everybody but this was an interesting and moving song bro. I like the content as we all have to get things off of our chests sometimes since we live in a sinner's world to be honest. So I felt it all thew way through as it was very real. I can't lie though and must tell you that it needs polishing, as in your delivery of the message needs to be polished so that more heads can bob to your insightful words so put a little more rhythm into it. The production was flame as I like the beat as well. The singing aspect of the song Definitely work on that bro as using vocal harmonies is an easy way of letting the world hear our pain but if you want to attract the masses work on the singing and you'll do/get better. Overall nice song though and I look forward to hearing more realness.

wonderful job well done Yo it is in deed a real had work for Yo to make thy people feel yo but it's not so easy to get the key to open the door of a real heart lacked up , job well done is a job met u