This song is have potential, however I feel that your delivery could be more exciting. You have a great hook as well. I would find someone that can give an insight on arrangement. Keep grinding towards your passion!

The song overall is a good concept and a good story however, the delivery sounds rushed like you couldn't wait to take off, which isn't bad but it tends to make you jump ahead of the beat at times. I think that you should get the instrumental and practice for live shows, and just relax when you spit allowing your natural flow to come out and that should fix your issue. After getting it down packed, hit the studio again and drop the entire song again, then compare the two and see if there's a improvement. Other than that I love it. Don't quit, just keep working, hard work pays off.

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I think the song could use a better hook, and maybe you can put a little more flow to your verses...the song has a good concept, just need a little more tender love an care to bring it all together

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It's definitely a great song. Flow, lyricism/words spoken, vibe, and just the way the song has a firm foundation under it. Laid this track right, "When you got something good, dont tweak it,, release it". Keep the creative artist touch you bring to music coming Fam! Much Respect, Mad Love Keep doing you - @KI$MET

This is a dope track right here fam nice beat and a nice flow to bring it out I always support indie artist they're the ones who always come up with the best material and sound hungrier then the signed artist keep up the good work fam

First of all nice track. I think that it had a nice beat, great lyrical flow and a decent message. I feel like if they don't wanna ride then leave them where they at and continue your journey personally. When we out here in these streets grittin to get where we need to be we don't need people that ain't down for us as artist and as a person. We need soldiers people that will see things from the same point of view.. I really like this track and hope Young X Gemini keeps coming with hits. I support you my dude.

Keep doing your thing bro patience is a virtue everything that happens with music or in life in general is all Check this out timing not on your time or mine but the most high my brother peace out.

Clean folks keep spitting mayne I went to school with a couple figgas from out that way yea am from the bay area so we recognize that real fire yep that's all I can say keep up the good work and don't stop grinding

Okay first off I can totally see, (hear!)...That you most definitely have a unique style, yet similar enough to keep (1's) attention...(no pun intended) Now with this said friend my opinion would be stick with your style its good, orignal, & you know well as me that talent kind of this sort CAN NOT be faked or duplicated... So without much further ado... i bring to you my honest opinion which if you can't already tell..ITS GOOOD...keep that up whatever it be that your doing keep going you are already there...People just dont realize it yet..! Stay positive Young X Gemini, you will make it to places others CAN and ONLY will Dream about....

Pretty nice man. On the critism tip you should had changed the flow up a lil bit throughout verses. Not telling u to change cause u gotta be who you are regardless but just constructive criticism that's all. Keep up the work though I hear ya.

WASSUP YOUNG X GEMINI. I'M FEELING YOUR TRACK. YOU PUT SOME GOOD LYRICS TOGETHER. I MEAN YOU WHERE TELLING A STORY. KEEP DOING WATCHA DOING HOMIE. IF YOU LOOKING FOR A FT. JUS HMU THREW THIS SITE.

I so love the way this song starts off!! Love the beat and girls voice in background. Over all its a good song! Hook is a little stretched but that might have been your vision. Stay grinding! L

Im feeling it,sounds really good,its something i could vibe to every now and then but i can say ill keep up with youre work.keep doing what youre doing man,cant wait to hear more,i know its gonna be dope bro.the vibe youre setting is pretty sick

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!