I always like that chicken picking guitar in a song, so good job with that. Your effects on the vocal for the first verse was fine but I would have cleaned them up on the following verses. I enjoyed the track for this one with its quirky sounds and variety throughout. As far as the lyrics, I wasn't as impressed with them and felt there is room for some rewriting of some of it. I also wouldn't have taken the hook (... good on paper) and used it so quickly in the song ( 2nd line of 1st verse). Other than those items, I enjoyed the song. Keep them coming!

"It Sure Looked Good On Paper" by Zap & The Wires is a funky track that stands out with its powerful sound and excellent production quality. The mixing and mastering are top-notch, ensuring that every element of the song is clear and impactful. The songwriting shows a strong influence from modern styles, blending classic funk vibes with contemporary touches. The song's energy is infectious, driven by a tight rhythm section and dynamic instrumentation. The vocals are delivered with confidence, adding to the overall powerful feel of the track. The lyrics explore the theme of things not always turning out as planned, a relatable concept that many listeners will connect with. Overall, "It Sure Looked Good On Paper" is a well-crafted song that showcases Zap & The Wires' ability to merge classic and modern influences seamlessly. It's a job well done and a track worth adding to your playlist if you enjoy funky, well-produced music.

Nice production quality, New Jersey sound is awesome. Very funky sound, nice blend of instruments and very strong song structure. Looking forward to hearing more from these artista - nice job !!

I really enjoyed listening to this track! It's got an infectious groove; the lyrics are unique, and the singer sounds like an old friend that I can't quite place yet has an appealing familiarity about him. The production is quite good, but the arrangement could stand improvement with a bridge slipped in to take the listener in a different direction briefly making it less repetitive.

wow nice this song has a really good melody..and ............... this song is was put together very well and it's unique....................i .juIst love the way the vocalist is sung and the drums and guitars are perfectly played .......................... this song had a style can't say enough about song ..................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank so much to letting me review your song you..again.************...............